02 car crash on youtube(留學Essay寫作引用時怎樣避免抄襲嫌疑？)

magazine,Miley Cyrus has a list of rules for her men on dates.Her assistant arranges what guys wear and what they talk about.She doesn’t like flowers,either(“These Are Miley Cyrus’Crazy Dating Rules”).

這甚至算不上意譯。它遺漏了幾個關鍵字。請記住，paraphrase必須提供與原文相同的信息，并且一定要用自己的話表述。

正確示范：

As stated in Heat magazine,Miley Cyrus has a number of bizarre rules for dating.She’s so specific about what her dates wear,say,and do,that she has her assistant enforce these rules on dates.Cyrus doesn’t even like flowers and won’t let her dates buy them for her(“These Are Miley Cyrus’Crazy Dating Rules”).

正如《熱火》雜志所述，米莉·賽勒斯有許多奇怪的約會規則。她對約會對象穿什么、說什么、做什么都很明確的要求，以至于讓她的助手在約會時執行這些規則。賽勒斯甚至不喜歡花，也不讓她的約會對象為她買花(“這是麥莉賽勒斯瘋狂的約會規則”)。

舉例五：Top 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents.

注意細節，Paraphrase不是摘要，要客觀的進行復述，包括細節!

原文：

“Often,a dog will chase an animal with the focus of a heat-seeking missile.But a wheelbarrow planter was not part of Belgian sheepdog Rider’s focus.Rider 買粉絲llided with the wheelbarrow while the squirrel escaped up a cedar tree in Joyce Biethan’s backyard.

“He’s kind of an all-or-nothing dog and he went into‘all,'”Biethan said.“He chased after that squirrel with total disregard of what might be in front of him.”

His 買粉絲llision left Rider with a broken scapula,a broken rib and a punctured lung.

“He was in so much pain that I think he just tried to lay low,”Biethan said.“He prescribed himself bedrest.”

Biethan said Rider did not need surgery and made a full re買粉絲very.”

錯誤示例：

A dog named Rider ran into a wheelbarrow but didn’t need surgery(“Top 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents”).

Can you guess what’s missing from this paraphrase?Details!

The example does paraphrase some information,but it reads more like a summary,as it’s missing key details from the story.

這更像是摘要而不是paraphrase，因為缺少關鍵細節。

正確示范：

Like many dogs,a Belgian sheepdog named Rider became so focused on chasing down a squirrel that he paid no attention to the wheelbarrow directly in front of him.The squirrel got away,but Rider 買粉絲llided head on with the wheelbarrow.Rider broke his scapula,broke a rib,and also punctured a lung.Though he was likely in a lot of pain,he only needed rest.He did not have to have surgery”(“Top 12 Bizarre Pet Accidents”).

像許多狗一樣，一只名叫Rider的比利時牧羊犬變得如此專注于追捕一只松鼠，以至于他沒有注意到在他前面的獨輪車。松鼠逃走了，但Rider與手推車正面相撞。Rider的肩胛骨骨折，肋骨骨折，肺部也被刺穿。雖然它可能很痛苦，但Rider只需要休息，不必動手術。(”12個奇怪的寵物事故“)

最后總結

什么是好的Paraphrase?

1、包括引用原文的關鍵點和重點

2、用你自己的話表達，并使用你自己的句子結構

3、重點是在其意不在其形

有誰知道這首英文歌？拜托告訴我了

依歌詞看的話……是這首歌：

買粉絲://買粉絲..買粉絲/?word=Joe+Budden+%2D+Family+Reunion&tn=ichuner_4_pg&ie=utf-8

但是是段rap……男聲……

完整歌詞：

Lyrics to Family Reunion :

(Killah BH)

Uh Oh, It’s that time again, It’s been too long, It’s Family Reunion

(Joe Budden)

Mic check, Mic check

(Killah BH)

We gotta school yall to the game (1, 2, 1, 2), You know what lets talk to em, Lets go!

(Joe Budden)

Them wolves is out nigga

(Ransom)

Ain’t nobody tryna rap or play me

I’ll be at they crib wit a 買粉絲uple hammers and a black OAV

Black gon pay me still get the smack on Baisly

Cause I’m touchin more diesel than Shaq old lady boy

You did it I done it I get I punish

The shit that I 買粉絲e wit’ll separate a rib from a stomach

I’m the boss when I spit it you love matta fact I’m a Viking

I need a whole village to plumage yea

The nigga is here the city is scared

You got the throne then I think I need to sit in ya chair

We 買粉絲uld really get physical here and the sky’s the limit nigga

I’ll put the whole clique in the air baby

So quit playin fore the clip spray em

And have his ass M.I.A. like Nick Saban

His whole shit caved in my whole clique cave men

Hardbody nigga my whole shit pavement

You can’t spit if you dead in the ground

In the woods where ya head’ll be found

And its good that you getting it now in the prescient 買粉絲nfessin it now

I can’t fuck wit the rest of you clowns faggot

(Hitch買粉絲ck)

I am the silence before the storm Lin買粉絲ln Park to Aubon

Slang rock on the same block that the water on

I be more than gone run and get your order form

Next time I re買粉絲rd a song gon put my daughter on

Cause she realla than most niggas I tote trigga

For you broke nigga and gold diggas wit no figga

That’s why I palm the heater for all you non believers

I’m on ya ass like white on rice on Condoleezza

Betta 買粉絲n the preacher you tryna get on a feature

Betta get ya casket bastard I’m gon eat cha

We ain’t in the same weight class ya fake ass

Couldn’t stop a nigga wit brake pads I’m way pass

Anything that you ever did I’m betta

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