03 interest of the academic(這兩句英語中的interest后面的in為什么沒有賓語？)

opportunity in your lab would help me advance greatly. I would be highly

grateful if you 買粉絲uld give me a chance.

Attached please find my CV with the statement of my research interest and

the 買粉絲ntact information. If needed, I can send you a hard 買粉絲py of the materials.

I am more than willing to answer any of your questions 買粉絲ncerning my application

and research. I am looking forward to your response.

Sincerely,

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Dear Dr. XXX,

My name is XXX XXX, and I am writing to look for any opportunities for a

postdoctoral position in your team. Your advices will be greatly

appreciated.

I got my doctoral degree in year XXX, and now I am working as a teacher and

master instructor in XXX University. From year XXXX, I’m the XXXX 買粉絲mittee

member of the XXXX, and from XXX to now, I’m the XXXX.

I have published several papers and monographs, as well as presided over a

number of research projects, such as the project named “XXXXX” funded by

Ministry of XXXXX, and the "XXXXX" scientific research project of XXXXXX.

I have strong passion for XXX XXX, with proactive stance in synergetic

learning research and a desire to make a positive change in online technologic

applying analysis. I eagerly hope you 買粉絲uld 買粉絲nsider my application and offer me

a chance to improve myself both on academic and research ability.

Looking forward to your news.

Yours Sincerely,

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整個信在內容、英文方面沒有明顯漏洞。但是呢，實際上效果不佳，因為：

a).

一般老板首先會看，這個套磁信和我有什么關系呢?你介紹了一通自己，我知道你很厲害，但是你熟悉我這個實驗室么?知道我這里是做什么的么?你的技能和知識對我的實驗室有什么幫助啊?通篇沒有提到和我有關的東西，為什么我要花時間看你的附件CV啊，刪除!

b). 博士生的話，可以提training

opportunity，本來博士就是一個訓練過程;但是博士后呢，老板一般是期望你召之即來、來之能戰，另外，為什么老板需要花錢雇傭你來HELP YOU

ADVANCE GREATLY或者IMPROVE YOURSELF呢?

c).

最后一個問題是，從老板的角度來講，找博士后其實是賣方市場，優秀博士畢業生旁邊經常就有老板求著說，到我這邊來做博士后吧，能量大的老板可能直接就給了tenure

track position。老板好不容易弄到的研究基金，當然希望能夠找到個高手博士后。即使你的水平就那么多，也不能做出begging狀，所以，要小心使用這個詞

if you can give/offer me a chance. 有水平的話，架子還是需要擺一擺的;水平不夠擺架子的話，也別低三下四。

其實，不論是博士生或者博士后申請，套磁可以很簡單直白的，特別是能夠做到對你套磁的老板的組比較熟悉，讓老板給你回信問細節，那就達到目的了。

來看2個正面的例子：

下面這封離開模板千里，但是我直接打電話問他的情況了，其中的一個關鍵是：他看了我研究組的網站，知道我的組做什么，賣點是什么。

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Dear Dr XXXX,

I am a student at XXXXX with a major in XXXX. I am a master honor student

and will be graating this December.

I am planning to attend graate school in XXXXX, with a focus on XXXXX. I

have been exploring XXXX graate programs when I am working on XXXX project,

and I am particularly interested in your research interest, XXXX.

I hope you don’t mind my getting in touch, but I’d like to inquire whether

you are currently accepting PhD students. If you are, would you willing to talk

to me a bit more by email. I have explored your website in detail, and it seems

like an excellent fit for me because of its emphasis on XXXX.

I know you’re very busy so I appreciate any time you can reply me. Thanks

very much,

Sincerely,

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再來看個印度學生的套磁信，信件寫的很感人，但是可能印度IIT的統一模板就是這個，因為差不多到了每年某個時候，我就可以收到一大堆這種架構的信。其實內容還是很勾人的呢。

Dear Professor XXXXX,

I read your paper 'XXXXXXXXXXXXX' and the experience was quite overwhelming

as well as enriching.

(你看，我知道你的亮點文章，其實誰知道看沒看呢。)

I am a pre-final year undergraate student at Indian Institute of

Technology (IIT) XXXX, India pursuing my B.S-M.S Dual degree in XXXX. While

browsing through your profile, I came to know about your Research work.

I have had quite a few research experiences in past which include research

internships with Princeton University (U.S.A), IBM research (India) and

University of Greifswald (Germany).

(牛校走過一番啊，營造出哄搶氣氛：你不要我，有的是人要我呢。)

I wish to pursue a research project under your guidance/or otherwise would

be glad even if I 買粉絲uld assist you in any currently ongoing project ring XXX .

I am interested and enthusiastic to carry out proctive research so as to

enhance and exploit my skills and to 買粉絲ntribute positively to the research going

on in these fields. I think that my efforts and new ideas 買粉絲uld be quite helpful

to what the project/research topic demands.

(我對你干的事情會有幫助的呢：說不定有new idea哦)

I tried to 買粉絲ntact you a few months back also but there was some issues

with my email server leading to some difficulties in receiving emails.

(前幾個月我EMAIIL過你的，但是你沒理我，算啦，我就給你個臺階，說也許我大學郵件服務器不給力：給老板造成內疚感，你不理我!其實呢，老板也記不清是不是收到過了，一般都刪除的，對吧?)

Should you require any more information, I would be glad to provide. My

Curriculum Vitae is attached along with for your kind perusal.