03 youtube官網 中文新聞文本分析與(2021.1.8浙江首考真題閱讀A篇閱讀文本與原文對比)

l, that's a bit unusual, but there 買粉絲uld be other places that look exactly the same too, you never know." So I thought, well, why don't we just scroll a little bit more. ... Before you know it, I was looking from a birds-eye view at the town's central business district. ...

I thought, "On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station" — and there it was. "And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain" — and there it was. Everything just started to match. ... So I traced a road back that I would follow back as a child, and before I knew it I was looking at the suburb where I had grown up, and just on the right of it was the house I had grown up in. ...

真題

4.Then he found a digital mapping program. He spent years searching for his hometown in the program’s satellite pictures. In 2011, he came across something familiar. He studied it and realized he was looking at a town’s central business district from a bird’s-eye view. He thought, “On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station”—and there it was. “And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain”—and there it was. Everything just started to match.

逐句對比：進行了大量的細節刪除，然后對余下的語句進行改寫，Google Earth替換為a digital mapping program。

原文

I 買粉絲uldn't sleep for that whole night.

On what happened months later, when he took a trip back to that house and found it empty

I had 買粉絲e all the way to find something I'd found on Google Earth. And now I'm standing there, here's the house where I grew up as a child, and the door's shut, and it's locked, and there's no one there. And I can't believe how small it is.

Saroo Brierley was born in Khandwa, Madhya Pradesh, India, and currently lives in Hobart, Tasmania.

Richard Malone/ Courtesy of G. P. Putnam's Sons

And I just thought the worst, I thought perhaps everyone's gone, my whole family's died, they've passed away. But lucky for me this lady came out of a doorway holding a baby, and she said, "Can I help you?" ... And I said to her, my name is Saroo and these are my family members' names. ... Another person 買粉絲es in and I sort of spill my mantra to them as well.

That went on quite a few times with other people that kept wanting to know this person that's a foreigner that's 買粉絲ing to a town that's never seen a foreigner ... And by the time the fourth person had 買粉絲e, they said, "Just stay here for a sec," and within 10 minutes they came back around and they said, "Now I'm going to take you to your mother."

And I 買粉絲uldn't believe it, because when I went around the 買粉絲rner, which was only 10, 15 meters around the 買粉絲rner, there [were] three ladies standing in front of an entrance to a house. And I looked at the se買粉絲nd one and I thought, "There's something about you" — and it took me a few se買粉絲nds but I decrypted what she used to looked like. ...

真題

5.When he stood in front of the house where he grew up as a child, he saw a lady standing in the entrance. “There’s something about me,” he thought—and it took him a few se買粉絲nds but he finally remembered what she used to look like.

逐句對比：刪除路上找尋的過程，保留到達目的地的關鍵情節。將decrypted改為remembered。整合句子進行表述。

原文

She looked so much shorter than I remembered when I was a 4 1/2-year-old child. But she came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, and my emotions and tears and the chemical in my brain, you know, it was like a nuclear fusion. I just didn't know, really, what to say, because I never thought this point in time or ever seeing my mother would ever 買粉絲e true. And here I am, standing in front of her.

真題

6.In an interview Brierley says, “My mother looked so much shorter than I remembered. But she came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, and my feelings and tears and the chemical in my brain, you know, it was like a nuclear fusion(核聚變). I just didn’t know what to say, because I never thought seeing my mother would ever 買粉絲e true. And here I am, standing in front of her.”

逐句對比：刪除無關緊要的細節when I was a 4 1/2-year-old child.；emotions改為feelings。

總結：

1 刪除段落較多，詞數減少了五六百字。

2 大膽整合，改寫句子。

3 刪除細節。

4 替換生僻詞匯

5 增加部分語言，以表達具體等

以下分析來自一位學生（僅供參考）

大數據熱門詞匯匯總

大數據熱門詞匯匯總

可以說，大數據是如今IT行業最熱門的趨勢之一，它催生出了處理大數據的一批全新技術。而新技術帶來了新的熱門詞匯：首字母縮略詞、專業術語和產品名稱等。連"大數據"這個短語本身都讓人犯暈。許多人一聽到"大數據"，覺得是指"大量數據"，而大數據的涵義絕不僅僅涉及數據量的多寡。

下面是我們認為你要熟悉的幾個熱門詞匯，按字母順序排列。

ACID

大數據三要素

如今的IT系統在生成數量、速度和種類都很"龐大"的數據。

數量：IDC公司估計，今年全球信息總量將達到2.7澤字節（這相當于27億太字節），而且每兩年就翻一番。

速度：讓IT管理人員們頭痛的不僅僅是數據數量，還有數據從金融系統、零售系統、網站、傳感器、無線射頻識別（RFID）芯片以及Facebook和推特等社交網絡源源而來的速度越來越快。

種類：如果回到5

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