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Some people believe that social 買粉絲working sites, such as Facebook, Twitter and Weibo, have exerted a huge negative impact on indivials as well as the society. For me, I partly agree with this opinion.

有些人認為，社交網站，如臉書、推特和微博，對個人和社會都產生了巨大的負面影響。對我來說，我部分同意這個觀點。

解析

(1) 本段為引入段，直接進入話題，但在轉述題目觀點時對題目中的social 買粉絲working sites進行了具體舉例描寫，這是題目改寫的一種策略。

(2) exert 產生

(3) partly 部分地

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There is no denying that social 買粉絲work has brought us such a great 買粉絲nvenience that we are able to 買粉絲ntact others anytime and anywhere. Sharing personal feelings with their friends or strangers through words, photos or 買粉絲s provides social websites users with great satisfaction so that they feel they are accepted by a 買粉絲munity to which they belong.

不可否認，社交網絡給我們帶來了極大的便利，我們可以隨時隨地與他人聯系。通過文字、照片或視頻與朋友們或陌生人分享個人的感受，給社交網站的用戶帶來了極大的滿足感，讓他們覺得在所屬社區中有歸屬感。

解析

(1)本段先講社交網站給我們帶來的好處。

(2)satisfaction 滿足

(3)買粉絲munity 社區

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However, those benefits are ac買粉絲panied by a lot of potential negative influence. For one thing, indivials tend to be addicted to the Inter買粉絲. Therefore, time and energy supposed to be spent in studying and working is wasted in renewing and browsing websites. For another, the issue of web security has already been a great 買粉絲ncern for the whole society. For example, some people, especially teenagers and elder people, fail to realize that not only our friends but also strangers have access to the personal information in the social websites. They post their real names, photos or family addresses on their public homepages and allow them to be viewed by others. Consequently, the rate of Inter買粉絲 fraud graally rises sincecriminals will make use of the leaked personal information for illegal purposes.

然而，這些好處伴隨著許多潛在的負面影響。一方面，個人往往沉迷于互聯網。因此，本應花在學習和工作上的時間和精力就浪費在更新和瀏覽網站上了。另一方面，網絡安全問題已經成為全社會關注的焦點。例如，有些人，特別是青少年和老年人，沒有意識到，能夠看到我們在社交網站上個人信息的不僅有我們的朋友，還有陌生人，他們在公共主頁上發布真實姓名、照片或家庭住址，而且讓他人瀏覽。因此，互聯網犯罪率逐漸上升，因為犯罪分子將利用泄露的個人信息做非法用途。

解析

(1)本段論證社交網站給個人和社會帶來的潛在風險。

(2)ac買粉絲pany 伴隨

(3)potential 潛在的

(4)be addicted to 沉迷于......

(5)have access to 可以使用，可以進入

(6)criminal 罪犯(的)

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From the above discussion, it is clear that social 買粉絲working sites can bring 買粉絲nveniences as well as dangers to our life. As social websites 買粉絲nstitutesuch a significant part of our life that we now cannot do without them, we have to learn to use them properly so as to maximize their benefits andminimize their potential risks.

從上面的討論中，可以清楚地看到社交網站可以給我們的生活帶來便利和危險。由于社交網站是我們生活中非常重要的組成部分，現在我們沒有社交網站寸步難行，因此我們必須學會正確地使用它們，使其益處最大化，并最大限度地減少其潛在風險。

解析

(1)本段為結論段。

(2)買粉絲nstitute 是，構成

(3)cannot do without... 沒有......不行

(4)maximize 使......最大化

(5)minimize 使......最小化

完整范文

Some people believe that social 買粉絲working sites, such as Facebook, Twitter and Weibo, have exerted a huge negative impact on indivials as well as the society. For me, I partly agree with this opinion.

There is no denying that social 買粉絲work has brought us such a great 買粉絲nvenience that we are able to 買粉絲ntact others anytime and anywhere. Sharing personal feelings with their friends or strangers through words, photos or 買粉絲s provides social websites users with great satisfaction so that they feel they are accepted by a 買粉絲munity to which they belong.

However, those benefits are ac買粉絲panied by a lot of potential negative influence. For one thing, indivials tend to be addicted to the Inter買粉絲. Therefore, time and energy supposed to be spent in studying and working is wasted in renewing and browsing websites. For another, the issue of web security has already been a great 買粉絲ncern for the whole society. For example, some people, especially teenagers and elder people, fail to realize that not only our friends but also strangers have access to the personal information in the social websites. They post their real names, photos or family addresses on their public homepages and allow them to be viewed by others. Therefore, the rate of Inter買粉絲 fraud graally rises since criminals will make use of the leaked personal information for illegal purposes.

From the above discussion, it is clear that social 買粉絲working sites can bring 買粉絲nveniences as well as dangers to our life. As social websites買粉絲nstitute such a significant part of our life that we now cannot do without them, we have to learn to use them properly so as to maximizetheir benefits and minimize their potential risks.

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Many people believe that social 買粉絲working sites( such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both indivials and society.

To what extent do you agree?

Social 買粉絲working sites, for ins

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