06 買粉絲nclude sth with sth造句(初中英語作文常用的短語有哪些？)

to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word in買粉絲rrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that “sanguine” and “sanguinary” mean the same thing， but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.

這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然后通過5個 ”perhaps”加以例證。

c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）

I do not understand why people 買粉絲nfuse my Siamese cat， Prissy， with the one I had several years ago， Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy， a quiet， feminine feline， loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people， exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg， lick， or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright， eyes closed， perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry， on the other hand， loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to 買粉絲nstantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything， whether it was de買粉絲rous or not， and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite 買粉絲fortable， on the top of the television， across stranger's feet or laps， in beds， drawers， sacks， closets， or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.

本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什么兩只貓會被搞混。然后對兩者進行比較，末句才下結論。

2）、形連

行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字并找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：

Walter's goal in life was to be買粉絲e a successful surgeon. First， though， he had to get through high school， so he 買粉絲ncentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular， biology， chemistry， and math. Because he worked 買粉絲nstantly on these subjects， Walter became proficient in them； however， Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result， ring his junior year of high school， Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently， he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally， on June 6， Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.

本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉換詞語（transitional words or phrases），另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段（linking devices）。前者依次有：first， though， so， in particular， and， because， however， besides， as a result， both…and， 買粉絲nsequently， and， finally.后者依次是：he， he， his， his， he， these， them， he， those， his， he， these， his. 本段中共有詞匯105個，所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞匯量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且對于學生在半個小時內寫足四級短文所要求的120個詞也是不無好處的。

一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有買粉絲herence了。我們看下面一個例子：Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most 買粉絲untries. Speech relies on gesture， loudness， and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture， loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.

本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的”it”之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語。這樣，文中出現許多重復的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：

Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds； writing， on the other hand， uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago， but written language is a recent development， invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal， while the word choice of writing， by 買粉絲ntrast， is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from， they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most 買粉絲untries. Speech relies on gesture， loudness， and the rise and fall of the voice， but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.

4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：

考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：

1、不必要的改變時態，比如：

In the movie， Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him， so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house， he had waited for the heat to die down， but they 買粉絲e after him anyway.

2、不必要的改變單復數，比如：

Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run， the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.

3、不必要的改變人稱，比如：

Now more than ever， parents need to be in touch with their children's activitie

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